Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Reported 2017, Academic Test)

Numerous people

claims

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that to decrease global environmental can be solve with the high

cost

of the

fuel

. In my opinion, I agree with

this

case, yet, it can lead to benefits and drawbacks at the same time. Environmental problems are extremely crucial issues in national and global scope

such

as climate change that could drive many natural disasters.

This

issue was connected with the

used

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of traditional energy sources

such

as

fuel

, coal, and others.

Therefore

, one of the

solution

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that can

be implement

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is by increasing the

cost

of

fuel

.

For instance

,

nowdays

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transportation is one of the

most

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highest why fuels

are consume

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are consumed

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for

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.

Hence

, the raise

cost

of

fuel

can detach people to use another alternative transport that

support

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sustainability.

On the other hand

,

fuel

is

the

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essential source to use in many aspects.

Consequently

, the

rose

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of

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the cost

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cost

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the cost

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of

fuel

could

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be

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affect many sectors.

For example

, fuels are usually consumed to provide energy that can be used in our daily life

such

as electricity, cooking, and transportation.

Then

, it will

brought

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an impact

to

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our financial

standart

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standard

. So, it is immensely for stakeholders to be more innovative

that

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can

used

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renewable energy

while

the

cost

is still

can be

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affordable.

To conclude

, increasing the

cost

of

fuel

could be

the

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effective way to tackle environmental problems.

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, there will convoy many sectors to more adapt

with

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their financial needs.