The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
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The picture illustrates a number of important changes which took
place
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in a town after the building of a hydroelectric power dam between 1990 and 2000. From the map,
it is clear that
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the most noticeable change that occurred in the town was a huge lake.
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, the forest and farmlands had completely disappeared by 2010, which had a great impact on rare plants and animals that originally lived in the area. in 1990, there was a
river
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separating the map into two parts. On the western
river
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bank, there was an ancient structure and a forest,
while
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the eastern side was the
place
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for residents to build their villages and farmlands.
However
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, after the electronic dam wall was built at the northern of the
river
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, those features were replaced by electricity equipment and the lake created a new fishing
place
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for residents. Looking at the maps in more detail,
while
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the mountains still existed, the rare flora and fauna originally living on the west side of the
river
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disappeared with the forest. The villages in the far east were relocated
further
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south of the mountains, and a large hotel was built in their
place
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. Meanwhile, a hydroelectric power dam was constructed with a wide range of electricity pylons appearing nearby.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words place, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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