The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words in 20 minutes for this task.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of
hours
in a regular week people of different sex
and various employment Fix the agreement mistake
sexes
status
spent on leisure Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
time
in 1998-1999 years.
Overall
, the biggest amount of free time
have
unemployed and retired individuals, Verb problem
is for
in contrast
, the least hours
of leisure time
have
people, who work full-Verb problem
are for
time
jobs.
Firstly
, the two categories, in which only females were participating are housewives and a part-time
job, at merely under 60 and 40 hours
a week, respectively. Moreover
, women, who worked full-time
had almost the same amount of free time
as part-time
female employees, which was around 38 hours
. In addition
, those two work statuses had the least amount of off-hours
. However
, men with the same work status had more by about 10 hours
weekly.
Secondly
, the most spare time
had
people without any kind of job, which was around 85 Unnecessary verb
apply
hours
in a typical week for men and approximately 75 hours
for women.Submitted by katiakardash07 on
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