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The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The bar chart illustrates data on the percentage of charity given by the British based on
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 starting from 18 until over 65 for 20 years. Looking at the information from the decreasing side, the
age
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group
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 of 18-25 and 36-50 placed first with over 10% regression. Both of them were closely followed by the
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group
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 of 26-35 with around an 8% decrease.
On the contrary
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, there are two groups that have experienced quiet growth after 20 decades have passed.
Firstly
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, the
age
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group
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 51-65 has grown by about 4%.
Secondly
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, the over-65
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group
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 has risen by up to 3%.
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, the unexpected growth of money spent on charity based on
age
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 is approximately 25% out of 100%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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