The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.
The bar chart provides information about graduate
unemployment
rates by gender within a two-year period
.
Overall
, even though there is a considerable difference both of them followed an increasing tendency at the end
of the period
. Both countries' graduate unemployment
rates had fluctuations. Men's unemployment
proportion outraced women
's every time the survey was conducted.
As far as men are concerned, their unemployment
rate was about 10% in January 2008, being higher than women
's rate by approximately 3 %. Then
it declined to about 7% in April and remained there until July. Subsequently
, the portion of men climbed to roughly 16% in October 2008 and followed the opposite tendency and reached 12% in 2009 and continued until April however
declined slightly in July. The last
period
of the survey showed hitting a high point of about 23%.
When it comes to women
, the percentage of unemployment
was 8% in January 2008, and it went down to 6% in April and remained stable in July. However
, the figure observed peaked at 11% in October and declined steadily respectively in January 2009 and April. The portion
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proportion
women
rose to 10% and increased 14% at the end
of the period
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