Students at schools and universities learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources (e.g. television, the Internet). Do you agree or disagree?

There is a saying
knowledge
is wealth and one of the most common
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to gain
knowledge
is via schools and universities,
however
with rapidly developing technologies educational
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has increased enormously. I completely agree with the notion of
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internet
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ruling the academic pathway and I will provide
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reasons for my agreement in
this
essay. The academic system at the schools and colleges
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consistantly
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consistently
constantly
revolving with the same teachers and their teaching methods which have
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adverse effects on
students
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performance. The efforts of the teachers in
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academic institutions are not 100
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and they merely do their job
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basis.
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,
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recent research survey
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stated
90
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students
score high marks when the subjects are taught with
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graphical presentation and in a concise form.
Consequently
,
human
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brain is
prgrammed
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programmed
in
such
a way that visual memory outweighs
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auditory memory.
Nevertheless
, with the
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technologies and social media education has become more easily accessible and interesting.
For instance
, during
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period the
students
were solely dependent on youtube videos and educational apps
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, helping them to study with clear concepts and retain the
knowledge
obtained.
Moreover
, the academic platform via
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internet
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has helped
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students
to quit
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tuition
centres, wasting time and money which had no effect on their scholastic
perfomances
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performance
performances
.
Nevertheless
, there are enormous study resources
such
as past exam
questionaires
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questionnaires
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and
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practice questionaries to prepare the
students
for the forthcoming exams easing their anxiety and stress levels. In conclusion, the
students
from universities and schools benefit from the internet which
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the topics in a graphical presentation making it easy for the candidates to understand,
thus
retaining the
knowledge
obtained.
Additionally
, time management
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life.
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