6.The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words
The bar chart provides information about the distribution of car-sharing operations worldwide namely between 2008 and 2016.
It can be seen that North
America
had the highest percentage share of global car-sharing usage by the year
2016, while
Europe had decreased by the same year
. Interestingly, Europe had the highest usage of global car share in 2008. In contrast
, South America
, Australia, and Asia had a very low proportion of global car sharing in both years.
According to
the figures, North America
significantly increased their share by 20% from approximately an initial 30% to 50% by the year
2016. On the other hand
, Europe dramatically declined their percentage from 60% in 2008 to 32% by the year
2016. Although
South America
, Australia and Asia had minimal contributions, they all saw a slight increase at around 3% by 2016.
To sum up
, North America
had clearly become the global leader in car-sharing usage by 2016. It will be interesting to see what happens in South America
, Australia and Asia in the future as their markets grow.Submitted by sunnyrogle22 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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