some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some
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think that
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who have skilled workers
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as doctors and engineers should
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in their
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,
others
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while others
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believe that working in another
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should be recommended. In my opinion,
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is an individual's preference and
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essay delves into both sides with my opinion. On the one hand, some skilled professionals,
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as doctors and engineers tend to
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abroad using their professional skills. One of the main reasons why they choose to
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internationally is the rate of income, which is higher than what they gained in their
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. Unfortunately, those skilled
people
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are the main
workforce
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in countries, especially in the poorer or developing states, and contributing their professional skills in the
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is essential for socio-economic aspects. If those workers go abroad to
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, the
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's
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will decrease, which means arising
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of issues in the
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,
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as the economic crisis.
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of the
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shortage, it is required to hire qualified workers from abroad with high salaries.
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, in Mongolia, there is an issue of skilled
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shortage,
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, the government is required to allocate more funds for
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workforce
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rather than the education field.
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,
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have the right to choose wherever they live and
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.
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would
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efficiently and successfully when they are happy or satisfied with their living conditions and adequate income.
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, the preference of living place and
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should be selective for skilled professionals.
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as
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family members and children are the main reason why
people
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prefer to
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abroad rather than stay in their
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. In my opinion,
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, their gained knowledge and
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experience cannot be comparable with anything, without inadequate
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salary or living conditions might be potentially affected to choosing in another
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.
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, working in their home
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where they graduated from their university is essential for the certain
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's socio-economic development,
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, choosing to
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abroad is
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's preference. Individuals have the right to select where they
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and live, which offers sufficient salary and living conditions.
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