Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on people. Do you agree or disagree?

As the world of personal

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evolved from a bulky titan-sized expensive machine to a portable and compactly shaped

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, PCs have been getting more and more common to find inside any family

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. The growth of the internet

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this

evolution even

further

, as

people

are able to connect to

people

all around the world, entertain themself and their family, and

also

do

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more efficiently in

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environment.

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, there is always a drawback

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every good

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, and for the extensive usage of personal

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, that drawback could be in the shape of increasing reports of eye

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,

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mental

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, a student distracted from pursuing better education chances, and many more.

Hence

why I agree that using

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every single day, despite the many benefits that they give, is unfortunately bad and should not be practised by anyone. The main appeal of using a

computer

, especially those that are connected to the internet, is the ability to be connected to

people

from around the globe and share your experience with them. I am, of course, talking about social media, as it is how most

people

allocate a good portion of their time to

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on a

computer

. We are social beings, so it is not a surprise that we would want to be able to talk to

people

, share our stories, listen to theirs, have fun together, and activities alike. But, doing so on the internet, especially

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, is not the way you are supposed to socialize. Aside from the obvious health risk of eye strain, reduced effectivity of sleep, poor time management, and other real-life impacts, constantly being in front of your monitor screen would

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your actual, physical body from being social.

This

illusion of actually meeting

people

has been proved to be one of the most dangerous

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of the digital world, as

people

would feel lonely instantly the moment they log off of the platform and would crave

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more unrealistic interactions, which is another way of saying addiction. Being addicted to anything is never a good thing, and by being addicted to social media, you are putting your real life on the line as you go

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deeper

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the neverending cycle of fake stimuli from social media. In conclusion, using

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everyday

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is horrible as it

pose

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numerous health and mental diseases. If you want to get the most out of

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, it is better to be in it for a bit, and

then

go outside and actually socialize with your local community, it is better and healthier for you.