The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for comunication outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's digital age, social media has been developing across the world,

people's

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and people's

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relationship

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relationships

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and society

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seen changes over time.

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author believes that the advantages of bringing more opportunities

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promoting

bussiness

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business

and enabling users to communicate quicker overshadowed the

drawback

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drawbacks

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of getting scammed.

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, social media has brought chances

of

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promotion for every online

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business

.

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is because it enables

people

to advertise their products online in a short time by texting

to

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online customers.

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, many entrepreneurs use social media nowadays as a quicker way

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to success, the

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of

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renting advertisement signs declined by 10

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since the invention of the Internet. Enabling users to communicate swifter can be considered

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a part

and parcel

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benefit because of

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feature

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a feature

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of connecting

people

around the world. By way of explanation,

people

are able to text their friends and relatives without sending letters.

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, Discord has added a feature of

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gamers to communicate

players

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with players

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all around the world to help them find

their

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suitable team for game tournaments.

However

, the drawback of getting scammed can

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by being aware and realizing suspicious acts.

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is because most

people

get scammed because they

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lack

of

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knowledge which creates opportunities for exploiters to take action.

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, exploiters

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attacked mostly

on

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young children and old

people

because the victims can be considered innocent, the percentages of scams on old

people

is

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twice higher than

on

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young adults. Taking everything into consideration,

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authors

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believes that

while

bringing benefits of promotion for online

bussiness

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businesses

and

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helping

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people

to chat quicker, the drawback of getting scammed can

be avoid

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by being aware and detecting strange activities of users.