WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given table elaborates pattern of faculty wedges as per the experience of the
years
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in five different nations in 2009.
Overall
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, the data explicitly that the highest payment was given by Luxembourg, but it takes
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a maximum
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of
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to reach.
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, Australia was the lead at least for take-home pay.
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with, in Luxembourg, teachers received the highest earnings at the start of their career recording 80,000 which is almost twice of other countries. After 15
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Luxembourg pay the teacher 119000, to reach the height of around 132000 they need 30
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' experience. On the other side, Australia's starting stipend is the minimum payroll compared to others which was 28000 and after 1.5 decades it reached 48 thousand which remains constant.
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, Denmark is paid 45000 in starting and reaches the maximum in 8
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with 54000 only.
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, Japan and Korea paid salaries to the fresh tutors around 34000 and 30000,
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it will double after the Fifteen
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period approximately 65000 and 48000.
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, Japanese and Korean teachers wait for 37 and 34
years
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to reach the maximum salary respectively.
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