The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The histogram illustrates the outcome of a survey about the three preferences of some
people
’s
coffe
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coffee
and
tea
buying and drinking habits in
last
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the last
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four weeks in some Australian
cities
,
such
as
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and Hobart. It has three main figures, namely the percentage of individuals who bought fresh
coffee
,
instant
coffee
, and those who went to a cafe for
coffee
or
tea
. More
people
bought
instant
coffee
than fresh
coffee
in all
cities
. About over 52% of
people
in
Brisbane
and Hobart chose
for
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instant
coffee
, and nearly 50% in
Adelaide
. Compared to it, the percentage of
people
buying fresh
coffee
was similar in
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
, at around 34%,
while
Hobart's chart was higher, at roughly 38%.
Besides
that, the same trend is observed in
Melbourne
and
Sydney
at about 44% and 48% of
people
in both
cities
preferred
instant
coffee
to fresh
coffee
at around 43% in
Sydney
and 42% in
Melbourne
. The chart shows that Hobart’s
people
recorded the highest proportion who went to
cafe
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cafes
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for
coffee
or
tea
in all the
cities
, with a significant rate at 63%, closely followed by
Melbourne
and
Sydney
at 62% and 61%, and by
Brisbane
, approximately 54% of the population went to a cafe for
coffee
or
tea
,
while
in
Adelaide
,
this
figure was around 39%.
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