Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Several individuals have the idea that new constructions need to be in the same style as the older
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in the residence area. Change the noun form
ones
one
While
some individuals argue that discord of this
thinking and allege that policies and autorithies
need to accept news building in the nowadays of their own choice. In Correct your spelling
authorities
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both sides. In my opinion, we need to use Remove the article
apply
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two views in our favour.
On the one hand, we have people Correct determiner usage
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changing
archicture
of Correct your spelling
architecture
olders
years and need to conserve. Not Correct your spelling
older
change
the Wrong verb form
changing
asthetic
of some Correct your spelling
aesthetic
aesthetics
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places
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apply
given
a sense of cultural Change the form of the verb
give
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historical areas, Correct your spelling
and
also
can improve this
zones economically with tourism. Correct determiner usage
these
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in the Change the verb form
is situated
southest
, and all stores and Change the word
most south
building
and future buildings need to Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
fallow
the Correct your spelling
follow
criterias
of the local Correct your spelling
criteria
authorite
to build something, and there it is a tourist city because of the Correct your spelling
authority
authorities
archicture
of there it is different, the reason of that policies keep the way of new builds in the same way of Correct your spelling
architecture
olders
days.
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older
On the other hand
, a lot of people dont
agree that they need to allow the authorities when they want to build Correct your spelling
don't
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own home or company. Correct pronoun usage
their
Therefore
the proffisionals
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professionals
of
the areas like Change preposition
in
engeeniers
and Correct your spelling
engineers
architec
can Correct your spelling
architect
architects
demostrate
what Correct your spelling
demonstrate
the
learn about the new architecture of Correct your spelling
they
comtemporany
days, Correct your spelling
contemporary
also
because new techniques are create
every single day, to put Change the verb form
are created
into
practice it is necessary Correct pronoun usage
them into
creat
new build.
In conclusion, in my point of view, the authorities need to be linked with both ideas, they can keep some areas with Correct your spelling
create
rule
of creat something Add an article
the rule
news
to be with the same architecture Correct your spelling
new
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the others how it happens generally in the downtown cities, and Change preposition
as
also
the authorities can approve new projects diffents
style of their own choiceCorrect your spelling
different
,
but need to be a little bit Remove the comma
apply
farway
from the downtown.Correct your spelling
faraway
far away
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