The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
This
graph shows the
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percentage
of
old
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the old
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population aged over 64 through a
centery
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century
cemetery
, in the
USA
, Sweden and Japan.
To begin
with,
it is clear that
Japana
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Japan
will have the highest aged population in the future,among the three
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mention
mentioned
countries. It
is
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started in 1940 as the lowest country when it come to the number of
senior
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a senior
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citizen
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citizens
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,but from 1960 it
is begin
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to rise gradually, and it is
predected
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predicted
that in 2035
there
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their
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numbers will
sky rocket
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skyrocket
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and will reach
it
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their
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peak in 2040. In 1940,the
USA
was the country with the most older people, and
japan
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Japan
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was the least when it
come
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to there aged
senior
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seniors
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. Yet, the sequence will change in 2035,
where
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when
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Japan
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Japan's
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olders
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older
numbers increase dramatically and
surpas
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surpasses
both the
USA
and Sweden.
while
the
USA
will be the least when it
come
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comes
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to numbers
compare
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compared
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to other
counries
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countries
. The
USA
face many ups and downs when it
come
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comes
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to
there
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their
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older citizen count between 1940 and 2018,
then
start
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starts
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to rise drastically till 2040.
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