The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
This
graph shows the presentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
old
population aged over 64 through a Add an article
the old
centery
, in the Correct your spelling
century
cemetery
USA
, Sweden and Japan.
To begin
with,it is clear that
Japana
will have the highest aged population in the future,among the three Correct your spelling
Japan
menstion
countries. It Correct your spelling
mention
mentioned
is
started in 1940 as the lowest country when it come to the number of Unnecessary verb
apply
senior
Add an article
a senior
the senior
citizen
,but from 1960 it Change to a plural noun
citizens
is begin
to rise gradually, and it is Change the verb form
is beginning
predected
that in 2035 Correct your spelling
predicted
there
numbers will Replace the word
their
sky rocket
and will reach Correct your spelling
skyrocket
it
peak in 2040.
In 1940,the Correct pronoun usage
their
USA
was the country with the most older people, and japan
was the least when it Capitalize word
Japan
come
to there aged Wrong verb form
came
senior
. Yet, the sequence will change in 2035, Fix the agreement mistake
seniors
where
Correct word choice
when
Japan
Change noun form
Japan's
olders
numbers increase dramatically and Correct your spelling
older
surpas
both the Correct your spelling
surpasses
USA
and Sweden. while
the USA
will be the least when it come
to numbers Change the verb form
comes
compare
to other Wrong verb form
compared
counries
.
The Correct your spelling
countries
USA
face many ups and downs when it come
to Change the verb form
comes
there
older citizen count between 1940 and 2018, Correct your spelling
their
then
start
to rise drastically till 2040.Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
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