The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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graph shows the

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percentage

of

old

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population aged over 64 through a

centery

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century

cemetery

, in the

USA

, Sweden and Japan.

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with,

it is clear that

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Japan

will have the highest aged population in the future,among the three

menstion

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mention

mentioned

countries. It

is

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started in 1940 as the lowest country when it come to the number of

senior

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a senior

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citizen

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,but from 1960 it

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to rise gradually, and it is

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predicted

that in 2035

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numbers will

sky rocket

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and will reach

it

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peak in 2040. In 1940,the

USA

was the country with the most older people, and

japan

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was the least when it

come

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to there aged

senior

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. Yet, the sequence will change in 2035,

where

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Japan

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olders

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older

numbers increase dramatically and

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surpasses

both the

USA

and Sweden.

while

the

USA

will be the least when it

come

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to numbers

compare

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to other

counries

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countries

. The

USA

face many ups and downs when it

come

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to

there

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older citizen count between 1940 and 2018,

then

start

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to rise drastically till 2040.