the table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of britain the table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed
The table and pie charts give data about police fund and their expenses in a Particular region in Britain between 2017 and 2018.
overall
, the police budget was over 300 million in both years and the main money was provided by National
government which increased from 175.5 million to 177 in the recorded period.Correct article usage
the National
On the other hand
, local taxes were approximately per three of whole
fund Change the article
the whole
also
it increased about
10 million pounds in Change preposition
by about
mentioned
years.
As can seen in Correct article usage
the mentioned
charts
police Correct article usage
the charts
cost
included three segments. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
employee's
salaries have the majority of expenses Change noun form
employee
while
technology had the lowest proportion, however
, it raised slightly in 2018 in Comparison with 2017, another part of costs" was buildings and transport which didn't change from 2017 to 2018.Submitted by zahrahosseini1992 on
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