The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
These pie charts and
table
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tables
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show how the
USA
,
UK
and Malaysia manage their
hazard
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hazardous
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wast
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waste
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.
To begin
with,
it is clear that
the
USA
had the highest amount of dangerous
waste
in 2000. As for the
waste
products it is shown that plastic bags are the biggest
waste
in all 3 countries, between 32 to 60
in
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million
of
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tons.and the majority of
USA
toxic
wast
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waste
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get
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gets
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dump
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dumped
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in
landfill
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landfills
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by
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50%,
while
in the
UK
and Malaysia, 45% of it get disposed of.
Firstly
, 50% of
USA
waste
products end
at
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up in
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the
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apply
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landfill
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landfills
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, meanwhile, the
UK
is the least country to use
this
method.
Moreover
, disposing the toxic
waste
is a commonly used method in the
UK
and Malaysia by 45%. but, it is the least used way in the
USA
. When it comes to
biggest
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the biggest
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waste
product each country generated in 2000, plastic bags have the highest numbers of
waste
compared to other products
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, uk, waste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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