The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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These pie charts and

table

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tables

show examples

show how the

USA

and Malaysia manage their

hazard

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hazardous

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wast

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waste

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To begin

with,

it is clear that

the

USA

had the highest amount of dangerous

waste

in 2000. As for the

waste

products it is shown that plastic bags are the biggest

waste

in all 3 countries, between 32 to 60

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apply

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million

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apply

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tons.and the majority of

USA

toxic

wast

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waste

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get

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gets

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dump

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dumped

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landfill

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landfills

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apply

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50%,

while

in the

and Malaysia, 45% of it get disposed of.

Firstly

, 50% of

USA

waste

products end

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up in

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the

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apply

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landfill

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landfills

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, meanwhile, the

is the least country to use

this

method.

Moreover

, disposing the toxic

waste

is a commonly used method in the

and Malaysia by 45%. but, it is the least used way in the

USA

. When it comes to

biggest

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the biggest

show examples

waste

product each country generated in 2000, plastic bags have the highest numbers of

waste

compared to other products

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

156 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent lexical in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming only language to be spoken globally. Advantages and disadvantages?

in their advertising bsinesses nowadays ususally emphasise that their products are new in some way. whay is this ? do you think it is a positife or negative development?

As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that car users should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.