The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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These pie charts and

table

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show how the

USA

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and Malaysia manage their

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wast

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waste

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with,

it is clear that

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the

USA

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had the highest amount of dangerous

waste

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in 2000. As for the

waste

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products it is shown that plastic bags are the biggest

waste

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in all 3 countries, between 32 to 60

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apply

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million

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tons.and the majority of

USA

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toxic

wast

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waste

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get

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dump

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landfill

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landfills

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50%,

while

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in the

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and Malaysia, 45% of it get disposed of.

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, 50% of

USA

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waste

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products end

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up in

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the

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landfill

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landfills

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, meanwhile, the

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is the least country to use

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method.

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, disposing the toxic

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is a commonly used method in the

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and Malaysia by 45%. but, it is the least used way in the

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. When it comes to

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waste

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product each country generated in 2000, plastic bags have the highest numbers of

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compared to other products

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

156 words

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The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

Animal are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that testing on animals is necessary for discovering medicine that helps fight diseases, while others believe it is not necessary to test on animals for this reason. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some businesses observe that new employees who just graduated from a college or university seem to lack the interpersonal skills needed for communication with their colleagues. What could be the reason for this? What solutions can help address this problem?

Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nuritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?