The charts below show the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Write at least 150 words!
The bar chart and table present the trend and percentage of various export categories between 2015 and 2016 from one
country’s
. Change the noun form
countries
country
Overall
, the exports
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exported
products
are dominated by petrol while
the lowest is from textile
, Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
also
, all but gems and jewellery had increased their exports
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export
earning
.
As can be seen in the chart, petroleum Correct your spelling
earnings
products
are
the highest commodity exports both in 2015 and 2016 Wrong verb form
were
stood
at over 60 Wrong verb form
standing
billion
dollars
with just a slight increase of 3%. Engineered good
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goods
gain
8.5% more in 2016 Wrong verb form
gained
start
from just beyond 55 Wrong verb form
starting
billions
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billion
dollars
to across 60 billions
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billion
dollars
. Gems and jewellery dropped the export categories by 5.18% in 2016 although
it still reached around 40 billion
dollars
.
Moving on other
categories, Agricultural Change preposition
to other
products
stood at over 30 billions
in 2016, close behind Change to singular
billion
from
2015 at only Change preposition
apply
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an exact
exact
0.81% of Change the word
exactly
increase
. The other Add an article
the increase
products
are textile
with the most noticeable change of 15.24% more than the previous year, Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
textile
gained roughly 30 billions
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billion
of
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apply
dollars
in 2016.
The
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Textile
textile
products
had the lowest export earnings with just over 30 billion
dollars
and about 25 billion
dollars
in 2016 and 2015 respectively.Submitted by claudideborah on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, textile, billion, dollars, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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