the diagrams below show the life cycle of a spec ies of large fish called the salmon. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagrams below show the life cycle of a spec ies of large fish called the salmon. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictorial illustrated the natural process life cycle of
Salmon
fish that could reach large bodies.
Overall
, there are three main development phases and sizes throughout its life from
eggs
into
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adult
salmon
. In the beginning, fertilized
salmon
eggs
are placed on the reeds that grow on stones in the upper river. The stream is more slow moving and the
eggs
can develop in approximately 5-6 months.
Next,
the
eggs
hatch into tiny fry with only 3-4 cm. They swim to a lower river that has a
fast moving
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stream for around 4 years to reach the smolt phase which is 12-15 cm in length. The smolt has a lighter
color
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. The final stage is when smolts reach adulthood for another 5 years in the open sea, the
colors
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darken with the size of 70-76 cm. The adult
salmon
then
swims back to the upper river to mate and continue its cycle.
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