The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph depicts how many metric
tonnes
of CO2 emissions
from
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person
in four EUropean
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European
countries
from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, during these forty years, CO2 emissions
in Sweden
experienced a remarkable decline, while
in Portugal, there was an uptrend in CO2 emissions
.
To be specific, initially
, the figure shows that each person
produced approximately 9 metric tonnes
of CO2 in Sweden
, which ranked second highest among the four countries
. Simultaneously, per person
in the United Kingdom produced the highest CO2 at around 11 metric tonnes
. After 1977, although
both countries
witnessed a downward decrease in CO2 emissions
, the reduction of CO2 emissions
from people in Sweden
was much greater than that in the United Kingdom, decreasing from 10.5 tonnes
to 5 tonnes
by 2007.
On the other hand
, CO2 emissions
in Italy and Portugal started at 4.2 and 1.8 metric tonnes
, respectively, in 1967. Both figures increased gradually, with the former surpassing Sweden
's emissions
in 1987, reaching 7 metric tonnes
. In contrast
to the other three countries
, per person
in Portugal produced three times more CO2, finally
reaching 5.9 metric tonnes
by 2007, making it the country with the fastest growth in CO2 emissions
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