the map below is of the town Galsdon. A new supermarket (s) is planned for the town. the map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. write at least 150 words.

the map below is of the town Galsdon. A new supermarket (s) is planned for the town. the map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. write at least 150 words.
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The given map demonstrates the two proposed areas for a new supermarket in Garlsdon
town
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that the planned property (S1) is situated in the countryside, with both railways and main roads,
in contrast
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to site 2 (S2) positioned in the middle of the
town
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itself, with only a railway track going through it. In terms of positioning and infrastructure, site S1 is represented by rural land outside the housing areas of the
town
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of Garlsdon, with a main road leading to Hindon, which is in the northeast section of the map and 12 km away.
Also
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,
this
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site is blessed with an adjacent railway line spanning across Garlsdon. When it comes to the planning of S2, the recommended area is the
town
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centre, and interestingly, it is a vehicle-restricted zone and only accessible by the train track.
However
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, outside of the vehicle-restricted zone, there are houses and two industrial sections, which are connected to other neighbouring towns
such
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as Hindon, Brasdon, and Arkonsal by three main roads.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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