The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph gives information about the changes in the number of foreign visitors in a country between 2 periods to three places, the coast, the mountains, and the lakes. In general, the visits to these places have increased over time.
As can be seen from the picture, the number of people who visited the coast was about 40 thousand
and then
decreased sharply from about 5 thousand
to 35 thousand
visitors in 1992. After
this
drop, visitors grew dramatically, becoming 75 thousand
tourists in 2007. On the other hand
, travelers
who visit the lakes rose significantly from 10 Change the spelling
travellers
thousand
in 1987 to 75 thousand
in 2022 but dropped to 50 thousand
in 2007. Tourist destinations where the tourists remain steady are the mountains. The number of people visiting the hills rose sharply from 20 to 35 thousand
in 20 years.
In conclusion, people visit the coast to spend their holiday rather than spend their day in the mountains or the lakes.Submitted by dewintaputri23 on
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