The diagrams* below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.
The first flow diagram illustrates the process of
glass
container production, and the second diagram shows steps in the process of recycling used Use synonyms
glass
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is made using three main raw materialsUse synonyms
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and that the manufacturing process consists of four distinct stages. It requires five steps to turn used Remove the comma
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products.
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the first stage Change preposition
In
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the production of Change preposition
of
glass
, sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed together. Use synonyms
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mixture is heated in a Linking Words
glass
furnace at approximately 1500℃ to produce molten Use synonyms
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be shaped, by blowing, to create the end products, namely Linking Words
glass
containers.Use synonyms
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recycling begins with the collection of used Use synonyms
glass
products. The collected Use synonyms
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then
washed in order to remove any impurities. At the fourth stage of recycling, the Linking Words
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can Use synonyms
finally
be moulded to create new items.Linking Words
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