The diagrams* below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.
The first flow diagram illustrates the process of
glass
container production, and the second diagram shows steps in the process of recycling used glass
.
We can see that glass
is made using three main raw materials,
and that the manufacturing process consists of four distinct stages. It requires five steps to turn used Remove the comma
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glass
into new glass
products.
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glass
, sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed together. Next,
this
mixture is heated in a glass
furnace at approximately 1500℃ to produce molten glass
. The molten glass
can then
be shaped, by blowing, to create the end products, namely glass
containers.Glass
recycling begins with the collection of used glass
products. The collected glass
is sorted according to
its colour,
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then
washed in order to remove any impurities. At the fourth stage of recycling, the glass
is crushed and melted, and the resulting molten glass
can finally
be moulded to create new items.Submitted by kmuxayyo97 on
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