The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The flow chart illustrates the its
process
of generating electricity
in a hydroelectric power
station
.
At first glance, this
process
is made of five stages. At first
the accumulation Add a comma
first,
water
flows to the power
station
in order toAdd a missing verb
have
power
converted to electricity
.
It can be seen that the process
of generating electricity
is done during the day and night. At the first stage
of this
process
the Add a comma
process,
water
of the river should be accumulated behind the dam which is open during the day to allow water
flow
to the Fix the infinitive
to flow
power
station
. Then
, there is
the reversible turbines which operate Change the verb form
are
generator
during the day to produce Correct article usage
a generator
electricity
. The produced electricity
goes through the power
lines and then
national
grid in order to Correct article usage
the national
consuming
.
After that, the Wrong verb form
be consumed
water
is guided to the low-level reservoir and at night, it goes back to the power
station
. In the final step, the reservable turbine pump
the Correct subject-verb agreement
pumps
water
into high-level
reservoir and it flows to get back behind the dam and the whole Correct article usage
a high-level
process
is repeated to produce electricity
constantly.Submitted by kmibehnaz98 on
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