The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The flow chart illustrates the
process
of generating
electricity
in a hydroelectric
power
station
. At first glance,
this
process
is made of five stages. At
first
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the accumulation
water
flows to the
power
station
in order to
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its
power
converted to
electricity
. It can be seen that the
process
of generating
electricity
is done during the day and night.
At the first stage
of
this
process
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the
water
of the river should be accumulated behind the dam which is open during the day to allow
water
flow
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to the
power
station
.
Then
, there
is
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the reversible turbines which operate
generator
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a generator
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during the day to produce
electricity
. The produced
electricity
goes through the
power
lines and
then
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the national
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grid in order to
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. After that, the
water
is guided to the low-level reservoir and at night, it goes back to the
power
station
. In the final step, the reservable turbine
pump
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pumps
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the
water
into
high-level
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a high-level
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reservoir and it flows to get back behind the dam and the whole
process
is repeated to produce
electricity
constantly.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, electricity, power, station, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reservoir
  • Penstock
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Transformer
  • High voltage
  • Renewable energy
  • Kinetic energy
  • Potential energy
  • Power grid
  • Sustainable
  • Flow rate
  • Energy conversion
  • Hydraulic pressure
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