Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: · Explain the situation · Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date · Ask for a different date to present your thesis
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Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to request you to change the date of my science project that need
to be submitted on Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
24th
of January Correct article usage
the 24th
this
month. As you know on the same date my sister getting married in Spain.
Howeover
, both sides of our Correct your spelling
However
famlies
Correct your spelling
families
family
has
done their planning for that day because it is already moved two times, and now Change the verb form
have
due to
family
emergency we all are decided. Suddenly, my grandmother is not well, and she is on Correct article usage
a family
the
deathbed right now.
Change the word
her
Moreover
, as you know, I gave
my best always into my presentation and got higher success in the class. So it will Rephrase
always gave
be
continue and will not be affected by Unnecessary verb
apply
change
Correct article usage
the change
the
date. Change preposition
in the
That is
why I am requesting you to please convert my submission change with
Change preposition
to
18th
of February Correct article usage
the 18th
instead
of 24th
Correct article usage
the 24th
January
.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking You,
Yours Obediently,
AmitChange preposition
of January
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greeting and closing
Your letter lacks the necessary structure of a formal letter and is missing key elements such as the date, formal salutation, and a proper closing.
logical structure
The letter should follow a logical flow of ideas with clear paragraphs. The second paragraph is confusing and mixes the family emergency with the sister's wedding date.
complete response
Task achievement is not met as the reasons for requesting the date change are mixed and not clearly explained. It's important to clearly state the reason - your sister's wedding.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is informal in places, using phrases like 'convert my submission change'. Ensure the tone stays consistent and formal throughout the letter, addressing your professor respectfully.
single idea per paragraph
Make sure to only include one idea per paragraph to improve readability and organization of content.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,