you have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a yar. writte a letter to the couple. in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the advertisement in the village notice board last
Sunday.
I am Jennifer Ramos, a student at Melbone
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Melbourne
Universitty
, looking for a part-time job when I saw your Correct your spelling
University
advertisment
I felt it is suitable for me. In your job advertisement Correct your spelling
advertisement
metioned
that you are looking for a bilingual person to teach your kids. I lived in France for 5 years with my grandmother, Correct your spelling
mentioned
therefore
, I am fluent not only in english
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English
also
in french
.
I am fully day available at Capitalize word
French
weekend
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the weekend
weekdays
I can only come to your home Change preposition
on weekdays
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2 hours in the evening. As I am studying Change preposition
for
post graduate
in psychology, I can provide you Correct your spelling
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some
useful parental tips which will Add the preposition
with some
beneficial
for your Add a missing verb
be beneficial
child
future.
I have Change noun form
child's
experince
as Correct your spelling
experience
language
teacher in Africa when I Add an article
a language
was
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apply
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for an organisation in my gap year. So, I Correct your spelling
volunteered
strogly
believe that I will be suitable for Correct your spelling
strongly
this
post.
I look forward to hearing form
you.
Yours faithfully,
Jennifer RamosCorrect your spelling
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task achievement
Ensure you address all aspects of the task, including explaining your suitability, what else you can do for the family, and reasons for wanting the job, with sufficient development for each part.
coherence cohesion
The response should demonstrate a clear overall progression where all parts of the task are logically organized. Make sure you have an evident paragraphing structure.
coherence cohesion
Starting your letter with 'Dear Sir or Madam' is appropriate, but make sure you end it correctly. 'I look forward to hearing form you' contains a typo and should be corrected to 'I look forward to hearing from you.' Also ensure you sign off with a more formal closing appropriate for someone you haven't met, such as 'Yours sincerely' when a name is known or 'Yours faithfully' when it is not, ensuring to capitalize the 'F' in 'faithfully'.
coherence cohesion
Each idea should be developed in its own paragraph. While you have divided your ideas well, they need more development within each paragraph to ensure that each aspect of the prompt is fully addressed.