Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opionion.
In
this
globalisation era, travelling across countries is escalated to share thoughts, beliefs, and customs. However
, whether the travellers should follow their own cultural norms or the place of visit is a matter of concern. I firmly believe that people
ought to stick with home
country's norms because moving to Correct pronoun usage
their home
other
state does not Correct quantifier usage
another
means
forgetting Change the verb form
mean
own
rules. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both Correct pronoun usage
their own
phenomenon
.
To commence with, referring to local language, dressing sense, and food indicate that Change to a plural noun
phenomena
people
are developing sense
of belongingness. They can be trusted by residents. Add an article
a sense
Hence
, their learning ability will enhance
. Wrong verb form
be enhanced
For example
, In india
, it is seen that tourists from Change the capitalization
India
england
Change the capitalization
England
came
every year to Wrong verb form
come
know
the historical history of Rajasthan and they learn more only Verb problem
learn
due to
speaking of
Hindi and wearing Change preposition
apply
kurta
and pajama. Citizens believe that they are touched with their roots and it is safe to exchange thoughts with them.
Correct article usage
a kurta
On the contrary
, following own culture
Replace the word
cultural
heritages
to another nation Fix the agreement mistake
heritage
indicate
cultural exchange. They transfer their views and thoughts Correct subject-verb agreement
indicates
between
each Change preposition
to
others
. It results Change to a singular noun
other
into
Change preposition
in
sense
of achievement. Without spending a penny Add an article
a sense
the sense
people
can learn about each other. As a result
, they can convey messages easily. For instance
, due to
migration people
from all over are residing in different developing places and reports are seen where every culture respect
each other and Correct subject-verb agreement
respects
celebrate
their days. Correct subject-verb agreement
celebrates
Thus
, it will benefits
to start new businesses too.
Wrong verb form
benefit
To conclude
, exchanging of own rules and regulations or adapting the another is debatable
topic. After Add an article
a debatable
an
Remove the article
apply
analysis
Add a comma
analysis,
it is clear that
both have their own advantages but I concur that carrying own norms to other spot benefit more such
as development
of new business and exchange of ideas.Add an article
the development
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