The provided table illustrates the figure of income and allocating on diet and clothes and the pie charts show the spending of allocating by family in a particular city in the United Kingdom between 2010 and 2013. The units are measured by poundsterling.
The table indicates the total amount of income and the budget spending on
food
and Use synonyms
clothes
during the 2010 to 2013 periods. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the pie chart reported the proportion of Linking Words
food
and Use synonyms
clothes
distribution including five sectors in the same Use synonyms
period
.
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Overall
, there was a higher income in 2010, but a lower amount of spending on foodstuffs and Linking Words
clothes
. On the one hand, there was an increasing trend in the sectors of fruits and vegetables and dairy products, Use synonyms
while
there was a decreasing trend in the items of Linking Words
clothes
, meat and fish. Use synonyms
However
, the other Linking Words
food
and drink items remained unchanged.
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To begin
with, the table depicts the higher income in 2010, at 29,000 pounds, but it only spent 14,000 pounds on foodstuff and Linking Words
clothes
in 2010, less 1000 pounds than in 2013.
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Moreover
, the percentage of spending on fruits and vegetables significantly grew from 20% to 35% between 2010 and 2013. Linking Words
Similarly
, the percentage of consuming dairy products gradually rose from 15% to 20% in the same Linking Words
period
.
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In contrast
, the proportion of Linking Words
clothes
dramatically decreased from 22% to 12% between 2010 and 2013. Use synonyms
Likewise
, the proportion of meat and fish significantly dropped from 25% to 15% in the same Linking Words
period
. Use synonyms
However
, the other Linking Words
food
and drinks sector just remained constant over the Use synonyms
period
.Use synonyms
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