The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opedend, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opedend, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
The provided data set compares the
subway
networks in six major cities in terms of the starting
year
, the total length of the
train
track, and the number of commuters transported per
year
.
Overall
,
London
's underground railway is the first to operate and has the longest railway line among the rest.
Furthermore
, referring to the
quantity
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number
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of people served each
year
, Tokyo's beneath-the-surface
train
system holds the top place. In terms of the opening date and kilometres of the route, the
London
Subway
is the oldest, commenced in 1863, and bears the longest railroad line (around 400 km),
whereas
the newest to join the transportation is Los Angeles' underground
train
grid, which has a medium expansion of about half of
London
's track. Paris, Tokyo, and Washington, DC, all joined the underground transportation system between 1927 and 1976, with
train
lines ranging from 100km to 200km. Kyoto City was introduced with an underground
subway
in 1981, holding a modest 11-kilometre railway track, which is the minimum length for an underground
train
across these six cities. When considering the service provided, the Tokyo
train
grid is the busiest, handling almost 2000 million travellers each
year
,
while
Paris follows with over 1000 million cases handled. The oldest in the group, the
London
subway
, accommodates 775 million individuals annually. The other three
showcase
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moderate usage by their townspeople, which indicates a trend of the latest
train
traks
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tracks
being designed to have
train
lines with short tracks intended to transport far fewer people than those of the past.
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