Write a letter to the hotel manager to inform you are coming with a group of people to have a business meeting at his hotel. - Introduce yourself and the group. - Tell about the business meeting. - Inform if accommodation is necessary.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to enquire about the
avialability
of Correct your spelling
availability
conference
room in your hotel on February 24, Add an article
a conference
the conference
2024
for a Add a comma
2024,
full day
business conference Add a hyphen
full-day
organising
by Furniture Manufacturer Association in the UK.
I am Jennifer Ramos, secretary of Wrong verb form
organised
Correct article usage
the furntiure
furntiure
Correct your spelling
furniture
manufacutrer
association, would like to book your hotel conference room Correct your spelling
manufacturing
our
annual meeting. The business meeting will be attended Change preposition
for our
most
of our members or representative which will be Change preposition
by most
approximatly
200 people from across the UK. We Correct your spelling
approximately
also
required lunch and dinner for the guests on the meeting day. If you share your menu, we will revert back you
with our Change preposition
to you
prefered
meal options. Since many a member is vegetarian, please send the vegetarian menu Correct your spelling
preferred
also
.
As the members are from different part
of the country, we would like to book Fix the agreement mistake
parts
also
60 rooms for the guest
who Fix the agreement mistake
guests
coming
from far away places, which is crucial. Please let me know the details as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
Jennifer RamosChange the form of the verb
come
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the logical flow of the letter is maintained by organizing information into clear paragraphs, each serving a distinct purpose.
task achievement
To enhance task achievement, make sure to address all aspects of the prompt in detail, including the introduction of the group, the specifics about the business meeting, and precise accommodation requirements.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence, use a variety of cohesive devices to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs smoothly.
coherence cohesion
Check for minor spelling or grammatical errors that distract from the overall clarity and professionalism of your writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
