The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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staying on

cruise

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ships

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and staying on

island

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an island

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in a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

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, both the

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of

visitors

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staying on

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ships

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and the amount of

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experience a gradual increase over the period. From 2010 and 2012, the

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of

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staying on

islands

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the islands

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rose gradually to 0.5

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, before declining to 0.25

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in 2012.

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number

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of

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staying on

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ships

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remained constant at 0.75

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from 2010 to 2012, after dramatically increasing to about 1.3

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. Between 2012 and 2017, the

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of

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staying on

islands

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the islands

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kept constantly increasing, peaking at 2

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in 2017. After a moderate rise from 2012 to 2013, the

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of

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staying on

cruise

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ships

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experienced fluctuation at about 1.5

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between 2013 and 2017.