The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
These two pictures depict the floor plan in a public library over 20
years
period until now. There are a few differences in areas of the library.
Correct your spelling
20-year
Firstly
, look into the Northeast corner, the children’s books room
has been changed into a lecture room
. Getting out of that room
door, you can see the
the adult non-fiction books place has Correct your spelling
that
got
replaced by the information desks and the Verb problem
been
selfservice
machines. In the middle of the ground floor, the tables and chairs Correct your spelling
self-service
self service
got
removed. Verb problem
were
Next,
in
the southwest side, the old reading Change preposition
on
room
with newspaper
and magazines has become the computer Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
room
. And
Correct word choice
Last
last
but not least, the room
at
the left-up corner with CDS, videos and computer games Change preposition
in
got
rebuilt into a bigger Verb problem
was
room
with two sofas and children’s fiction books.
To conclude
, after 20 years the Central Libray got many noticeable changes between the rooms and also
the expansion of the North-west room
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