The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
These two pictures depict the floor plan in a public library over 20
years
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20-year
period until now. There are a few differences in areas of the library.
Firstly
, look into the Northeast corner, the children’s books
room
has been changed into a lecture
room
. Getting out of that
room
door, you can see
the
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the adult non-fiction books place has
got
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replaced by the information desks and the
selfservice
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self-service
self service
machines. In the middle of the ground floor, the tables and chairs
got
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removed.
Next,
in
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the southwest side, the old reading
room
with
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and magazines has become the computer
room
.
And
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last
but not least, the
room
at
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the left-up corner with CDS, videos and computer games
got
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rebuilt into a bigger
room
with two sofas and children’s fiction books.
To conclude
, after 20 years the Central Libray got many noticeable changes between the rooms and
also
the expansion of the North-west
room
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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