Some people prefer to go to gym and clubs for health care but others say walking and jumping stairs are more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are many

ways

in which individuals try to stay fit.

while

some people opt for exercising at gyms and clubs, others suggest that walking and jumping the

stairs

is a better method of achieving good health.

Although

both methods are good, I believe that walking and jumping

stairs

on a regular basis is enough exercise to stay in shape. The benefits of both methods will be discussed in the following paragraphs. On the

one

hand , there are a lot of people who believe that, for

one

to keep fit, the gym and clubhouses have to be visited.though

this

is partly true, the fact still remains that different

ways

of exercising the joints and muscles of the body can be performed at an athletic facility, where there is

an

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added advantage of being supervised by a gym instructor,

also

, there are accessible machines which can be used to perform various exercises.

For instance

, a report says that the majority of the athletes visit a gym at least every week, in order to stay strong and healthy.

On the other hand

, individuals who are not disposed to visiting an athletic facility or clubs may prefer to engage in walking and running exercises which could be done on the

stairs

.

This

method is much easy and accessible to almost everyone, who is interested in finding

ways

to stretch the joints and muscles.

Moreover

,

due to

lack of time ,lack of finance and

one's

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lifestyle, majority of the people may not have the time to visit a gymnasium for physical training. Thereby,

instead

of being hindered from having a physical fitness test

due to

the aforementioned constraints, they tend to opt for moving around the

stairs

. A good example is

a

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research carried out in the

U.S

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U.S.

, relating to

ways

in which weight can be lost,

discovered

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that regular walking and running help to break down fats in the body,

therefore

, reducing weight and keeping

one

fit.