The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
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The paragraph illustrates the
demand
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for 4 types of textiles over a period of 35 years.
Overall
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,
Polyester
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and
cotton
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accounted for the majority of the global
demand
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for textiles.
By contrast
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, Cellulosic and wool took up only a small minority of the global
demand
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for textiles.
Polyester
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,
cotton
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, and cellulosic witnessed a significant increase
at the end
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of periods, except for wool which remained stable. At the start of the period,
cotton
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demand
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was about 11
million
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tons
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, which was the highest
demand
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in 1980. From 1980 to 2015, both
polyester
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and
cotton
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experienced a gradual increase.
Polyester
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reached at highest point at just under 70
million
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tons
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in 2015. From 1980 to 1997, cellulosic saw a moderate decrease, before a gentle growth to around 9
million
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tons
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by 2015.
On the other hand
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, wood increased steadily between 1980 and 1998. Afterwards, there was a sudden dip in wood and stability at approximately 2
million
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tons
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until 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, polyester, cotton, million, tons with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global demand
  • Textile industry
  • Natural fibers
  • Synthetic fibers
  • Manufacturing advancements
  • Fashion trends
  • Consumer preferences
  • Economic factors
  • Purchasing power
  • Eco-friendly materials
  • Market share
  • Production capacity
  • Polyester
  • Cotton
  • Wool
  • Nylon
  • Demand curve
  • Sustainability
  • Textile innovation
  • Fluctuations
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