The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The paragraph illustrates the
demand
for 4 types of textiles over a period of 35 years.
Overall
,
Polyester
and
cotton
accounted for the majority of the global
demand
for textiles.
By contrast
, Cellulosic and wool took up only a small minority of the global
demand
for textiles.
Polyester
,
cotton
, and cellulosic witnessed a significant increase
at the end
of periods, except for wool which remained stable. At the start of the period,
cotton
demand
was about 11
million
tons
, which was the highest
demand
in 1980. From 1980 to 2015, both
polyester
and
cotton
experienced a gradual increase.
Polyester
reached at highest point at just under 70
million
tons
in 2015. From 1980 to 1997, cellulosic saw a moderate decrease, before a gentle growth to around 9
million
tons
by 2015.
On the other hand
, wood increased steadily between 1980 and 1998. Afterwards, there was a sudden dip in wood and stability at approximately 2
million
tons
until 2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global demand
  • Textile industry
  • Natural fibers
  • Synthetic fibers
  • Manufacturing advancements
  • Fashion trends
  • Consumer preferences
  • Economic factors
  • Purchasing power
  • Eco-friendly materials
  • Market share
  • Production capacity
  • Polyester
  • Cotton
  • Wool
  • Nylon
  • Demand curve
  • Sustainability
  • Textile innovation
  • Fluctuations
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