The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart indicates the yearly spending
on
the Change preposition
in
school
by United
Kingdom in 2 decades. There are 5 Correct article usage
the United
catagories
which are mentioned here that what kind of stuff Correct your spelling
categories
were
used in Change the verb form
was
school
to better education.
During these two decades, the school
spent the highest amount on teacher's salaries which was between 40% to 50%. In the year of
1981, 15% of the expenditure was spent on furniture and Change preposition
apply
another
equipment and after 10 years, it Correct quantifier usage
other
was
decreased by 5% and in 2001, their expenditure Unnecessary verb
apply
was
increased which was 23%. For that reason, they had to increase expenditure Unnecessary verb
apply
in
insurance which was 8% in 2001 Change preposition
on
also
compared to the past it was increased by 6%. It can be seen that the supporting staff who's
salaries were continuously decreased in the past 2 decades. Correct your spelling
whose
Money
was spent on resources like books, 15% of money
was spent in 1981 and after 10 years it Add an article
the money
was
increased by 5% after a decade compared to 1981, Unnecessary verb
apply
above
Correct article usage
the above
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
money
Add an article
the money
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
decrased
by nearly 50%(9%).
Correct your spelling
decreased
To sum up
, it was good that Correct your spelling
spending
spendig
big amount Correct your spelling
spending
of
the teacher's salaries Change preposition
on
also
help
Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
for
themselves and Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the student
student
and increasing Fix the agreement mistake
students
spent
Correct article usage
the spent
money
on furniture was also
benefit
for the
Replace the word
beneficial
school
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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