Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many are of the opinion that nowadays

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males and

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females

have equal rights;

however

, others maintain that there are still significant changes to be made in order to reach

this

point. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the viewpoint of the latter.

Nevertheless

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equality

has already been achieved

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years of fights,

women

in a majority of

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countries

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right to vote in elections.

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validation is widely thought to be a key factor, as it is, to a considerable extent, a sign of

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free will for humans.

For example

, in Poland,

females

struggled to obtain suffrage for almost 50 years, so

this

establishment was a turning point in terms of

equality

between the genders.

However

, some argue that there are still crucial steps to be taken in order to accomplish

equality

between

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men and

women

.

This

is

due to

numerous protests and strikes, regarding

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of treating people of different genders, that are constantly taking place in many countries all around the world. France is a prime example, where

females

have recently organized a campaign against inequality of salaries in workplaces.

Thus

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it is clear that

despite

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significant

improvements that have already been made, in many countries there is still

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for

further

corrections in

equality

between

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females

and

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males.

To conclude

, the debate on whether

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men and

women

have equivalent prerogatives is complex and multifaceted.

Although

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women

already have the right to vote in elections, I maintain that

due to

ongoing

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there is still an undeniable need for improvement.