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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from thoir choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #person #culture #character #thoir #choice #clothes
People
of
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 different countries have lots of cultures and trends of dressing. Some individuals believe that it is easy to talk about someone's
culture
 and
behavior
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 from his clothing.I partially agree with the given narrative because we can not judge
the
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 person's
character
 by his attire.In
this
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i
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 will argue on my opinion of view before presenting a
balance
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 viewpoint.
First,
I would like to talk about
culture
,as nowadays we are living in the era of modernization.so
public
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have
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 their own
set up
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set-up
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 regarding
culture
 and tradition.
Although
,they followed the fashions,brands and
western
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 cultures,
bur
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but
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 they have forgotten their own customs and values as well.
As a result
,some people are not respected by civilized countries.As
for
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far
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 as
character
 is concerned,it is so complicated as we can understand humans by their dressings whether they are clean or dirty.
For instance
, fabrics can tell us the outlooks of men,but not the characters of them whether they have good
character
 or lose.
On the other hand
, some individuals believe that
although
, we do not get the idea of
person's
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character
 by their clothes
but
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cleanliness is essential whether
dress
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the dress
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 is branded or simple as the holly prophet Muhammad
pbuh
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 said:" cleanliness is the half belief."
Moreover
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 every nation
have
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it's
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 own unique way
to display
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it's
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 personality. In the light of above discussion, I would like
to conclude
 that a number of religions followed by
mankinds
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mankind
 restrictions on following the dressing and personal opinion options of spending wealth on outlook.I overheatly believe analysing someone's
character
 and
culture
 by clothes is unfair.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural heritage
  • traditional garments
  • personality attributes
  • social conformity
  • profession-related attire
  • superficial versus intrinsic
  • context-dependent
  • economic constraints
  • peer pressure
  • individualism versus collectivism
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