Task 1: The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart compares how frequently
Americans
ate in fast-food
restaurants
in three separate years (2003, 2006, and 2016)
Overall
, the proportion of people eating in fast-food
restaurants
daily accounts for the lowest percentage in all three years. While
most Americans
went to fast-food
restaurants
once a week between 2003, and 2006, and once or twice a month in 2013.
In 2003 and 2006, more than one-third of Americans
ate in fast food
restaurants
once a week, but the number decreased to around 27% in 2013. The proportion of Americans
who consumed fast food
once or twice a month between 2003, and 2006 declined by an appropriate 2%, and 8% respectively. While
increasing by 6% in 2013.
The proportion of people who had fast food
several times a week fluctuated between around 16% and 20%, and these percentages were slightly higher than the figures for those eating this
food
a few times a year. Daily eaters and people who never ate fast food
accounted for very small percentages, ranging from just 3% to 5%.Submitted by khanhlinh892002 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words americans, restaurants, food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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