The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
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A glance at the diagram provided reveals some information about the production of instant noodles.
Overall
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it is clear that
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this
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process has eight steps, which
begins
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with storing flour from a truck in the silos and
terminates
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with labelling and sealing of the manufactured instant noodles.
First
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stage of the process begins with gathering the raw material, which is flour, in storage silos,
then
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this
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flour is mixed with water and oil in the mixer
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machine
.
Next
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step involves passing the mixed product through rollers on the dough sheets before they reach
to
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dough
strups
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strips
straps
. In the fifth stage of
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, the product is shaped round;
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this noodles
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these noodle
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discs will be cooked and dried. Cooked noodle is put in cups with vegetables and spices prior to
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last
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the last
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step, which is
labeling
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labelling
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and sealing the final product.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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