The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The given bar graphs demonstrate the difference between habits of drinking and or buying tea and or
coffee
among Australia
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Australian
citizens’
of Change noun form
citizens
five
cities
. As an overall
trend, it can be seen that in all five
cities
the lowest percentage of Add a comma
cities,
people
have bought fresh coffee
in the last
four weeks.
The chart clearly shows that people
in all five
cities
prefer buying instant coffee
instead
of fresh one
. In a number of Correct pronoun usage
ones
cities
like Sydney and Melbourne
the difference is less than 5%, Add a comma
Melbourne,
however
, in Brisban
it is slightly more than 15%.
It is interesting to note that not only do the residents buy Add a comma
Brisban,
coffee
, they
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but they
also
regularly visit cafés, and it is a trend in all capital
except Adelaide. From the Fix the agreement mistake
capitals
data
we can see that in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart almost the same percentage of Add a comma
data,
people
(around 60%) went to a café for tea or coffee
and it is approximately 20% more than in Adelaide.
It is obvious that the habits of the residents of various cities
are pretty similar. In four out of five
cities
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cities,
people
would prefer going to a café instead
of buying instant coffee
, whereas
buying fresh coffee
is at
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in
the
third place. Only in Correct article usage
apply
Adelaide
the results are slightly Add a comma
Adelaide,
various
: the most popular trend there is buying instant Replace the word
varied
coffee
while
buying fresh coffee
is still the least desirable option in all other cities
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