Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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people

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say that the declining population of important species of

animals

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and

plants

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is the main problem in our environment which affects our time.

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others say there are more important environmental

problems

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. It might be true that the loss of

animals

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and

plants

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are

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the

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crucial

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problems

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, but

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argument could be argued by realising that the problem is not only about living things. Particular species of

animals

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and

plants

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are crucial in our world because they are the

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creatures and living things. Time is limited and it is the same as the special species, it can be caused by

people

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. Many

people

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like to hunt

animals

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for fun

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then

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and then

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sell them to collectors.

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, the body parts of

animals

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will be taken by the

people

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for collection.

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, there are more crucial

problems

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to be worried about. Global warming is one of them that can affect our lives in the future. Nowadays, the situation feels so warm and hot, even though sometimes the weather is either cloudy or windy.

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, sometimes, the weather is slightly easy to change, in the morning it would be rainy

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after minutes, it would be sunny. Another environmental problem is the ice in Greenland starts to melt. Not only

affect

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our lives but

also

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give

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the impacts for

animals

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that stay in. The

melt

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of ice in Greenland could be a sign of global warming and it is completely

our

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important

problems

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that need to

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as soon as possible. In conclusion, both of them have their own

problems

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. I believe that losing

animals

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and

plants

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are

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the most crucial environmental

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problems

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problem

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. Since they are

kinda

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same

with

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us, they breathe, eat and drink. So, I think living things need to be

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it

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