The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph compares the amount of carbon dioxide
emission
for one single person
among countries, such
as,
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United
Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of forty years from 1967 to 2007.
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Overall
, during this
forty-year period, United
Kingdom remained the biggest spenders on emissions, with all three other countries spending much less on them per Correct article usage
the United
person
.
In 1967 Portugal spent the least amout
of fuel per Correct your spelling
amount
person
, while
Italy and Sweden spent as much as each other. However
, by 1977, amount
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the amount
emission
declined in Sweden and in Italy average carbon dioxide emission
increased until
8 metric tonnes by 1997. As can be seen from the graph, the amount of average emissions per Change preposition
to
person
increased only in Portugal and Italy. However
, rose the most dramatically in Portugal. The period between 1987 and 1997 saw a sharp growth and in 2007 the Portugals spent three times as much emission
as they did in 1967.Fix the agreement mistake
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