The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows how students who did not start a
part time
job after college spent their time in 2018.
Add a hyphen
part-time
Firstly
, most graduates, approximately 29,665 people decided to continue their studies after getting their diploma. Others, about 17,735 started working part time
, Add a hyphen
part-time
however
exactly 16,235 individuals were unemployed. Add a comma
however,
Lastly
, a mere amount of 3,500 ex-students dvelved
into voluntary Correct your spelling
delved
evolved
work
.
Secondly
, 2,725 postgraduates started another degree, slightly more than those who started doing part-time work
(2,535). 1,625 of them were unemployed however
and only 345 people started voluntary work
.
Overall
, most students leaving their higher education continued their studies, a
considerable amount worked part-time, though some remained either unemployed or did voluntary Correct word choice
and a
work
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