The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The above line chart demonstrates visitor numbers of the specific Caribbean
island
over 7 years from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
, the information contained millions (Linking Words
M
) of people based on two accommodations, cruise ships, symbolized by Use synonyms
rectangle
and the Add an article
a rectangle
the rectangle
Island
, drawn by a triangle, and the total amount respectively.
In general, the total number of tourists increased, except Use synonyms
on
2015, where stability was observed at 2.7M throughout the year until 2016. Change preposition
in
Afterward
, it rose again to 3.5M in the following year.
Partially, cruise ship visitors Change the spelling
Afterwards
amount
consistently increased except for 2012 Verb problem
apply
that
was less than 0.5M. Correct pronoun usage
which
And similar
conditions occurred for Correct word choice
Similar
island
residents Use synonyms
on
2016 and Change preposition
in
also
remained Linking Words
on
almost the same level from 2010 to 2011. Change preposition
at
Additionally
, to compare these pair of circumstances, people constantly Linking Words
more
prefer to Correct quantifier usage
apply
staying
on Wrong verb form
stay
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island
but later, in the middle of 2015, the situation completely changed and Correct article usage
the island
percent
of people who want Correct your spelling
the percentage
stay
on cruise ships surpassed that of staying on the Fix the infinitive
to stay
island
.Use synonyms
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