The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make 

comparisons where relevant.
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The above line chart demonstrates visitor numbers of the specific Caribbean
island
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over 7 years from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the information contained millions (
M
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) of people based on two accommodations, cruise ships, symbolized by
rectangle
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a rectangle
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and the
Island
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, drawn by a triangle, and the total amount respectively. In general, the total number of tourists increased, except
on
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in
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2015, where stability was observed at 2.7M throughout the year until 2016.
Afterward
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, it rose again to 3.5M in the following year. Partially, cruise ship visitors
amount
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apply
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consistently increased except for 2012
that
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which
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was less than 0.5M.
And similar
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conditions occurred for
island
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residents
on
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in
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2016 and
also
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remained
on
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at
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almost the same level from 2010 to 2011.
Additionally
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, to compare these pair of circumstances, people constantly
more
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apply
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prefer to
staying
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stay
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on
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island
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the island
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but later, in the middle of 2015, the situation completely changed and
percent
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the percentage
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of people who want
stay
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to stay
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on cruise ships surpassed that of staying on the
island
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tourists
  • Caribbean
  • Visit
  • Graph
  • Summarize
  • Trend
  • Fluctuate
  • Peak season
  • Anomalies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparisons
  • Sector
  • Significant
  • Patterns
  • Overview
  • Analyze
  • Data
  • Year-on-year
  • Percentage
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