The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The table depicts
Trillion
Watt Hours (Replace the word
the trillion-watt
TWh
) of world electricity
production
from five different renewable energy sources
over the four years between 2009 and 2012.
Overall
, the five energy resources have consistently increased with hydraulics becoming the largest production
along
the given period, followed by wind, biomass, geothermal, and solar respectively.
As seen in the table, the most striking Change preposition
during
of
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electricity
production
was hydraulic in 2012 which hit the
peak of 3,663.4 Correct article usage
a
TWh
in total; while
,
Solar became the lowest energy Remove the comma
apply
sources
with only 21 Fix the agreement mistake
source
TWh
production
compared with the other sources
during the period.
In 2009, hydraulics led the electricity
production
with 3,329 TWh
, Wind was also
high with 276.4 TWh
which was merely 3% with Biomass, while
the geothermal 67.4 TWh
and solar 21 TWh
at the rest.
In
2010 until the end of the period, hydraulic was still in the top position followed by Change preposition
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the
others like wind and solar became the most noticeable because Correct article usage
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electricity
production
sharply increased more
than 100% in order. Geothermal and biomass show Change preposition
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the
steady increase, being left behind by the other Correct article usage
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sources
, which only increased 1
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