the pie charts show The percentage of the working day adults spend doing difference activities in a country in 1958 and 2008.
The chart illustrates the
number
of different activities
that adults
do during the working day
in 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, relaxing at home, sleeping, travelling to work, going out with friends or family, and doing other interests or playing sports were several activities
that adults
did besides
working a day
. The largest gap number
between activities
that adults
did in 1958 and 2008 was going out with friends or family.
In 1958, the most activities
that adults
did in a day
was sleeping, with the number
32%. Working was the second activity that had a large percentage with the number
33%. The rare activities
that people
did in 1958 were travel to work and relaxing at home. Furthermore
, in this
year only 6% of people
who play sport in the working day
.
This
is very different from the condition in 2008. In 2008, people
mostly worked during the day
rather than sleeping. The percentage of sleeping was decreased by 7% from the percentage in 1958. Besides
that, this
year, people
rarely hung out with their friends or family and did more often sports activities
than in 1958, with the number
8%.Submitted by zahra.ghaisanis on
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