The chart gives information abour migration to the UK. The chart shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intented to stay in the UK. And the pir chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.
The chart illustrates the duration of
immigrants
in the years between 2000-2008 intended to stay in the United Kingdom. The second chart illustrates the reasons for immigrants
to stay in the United Kingdom in 2008.
Overall
, most immigrant
favored Fix the agreement mistake
immigrants
to stay
in the UK for more than 2 years. The line chart shows a steady increase from 2000 until 2004, Change the verb form
staying
then
the number stayed constant until 2008 at around 250 people. In contrast
, around 150 people chose to stay for more than 4 years, and the number remained placid from 2000 until 2008.
Eclectic reasons were behind these migration
to the United Kingdom. In 2008, the majority of Fix the agreement mistake
migrations
immigrants
decided to migrated
to the UK solely to work. Change the verb
migrate
In addition
, just 6% belows
the immigrant worker, Correct your spelling
below
32
% were students. Another 16% were Correct word choice
and 32
immigrants
who wanted to be reunited with their family in the UK.Submitted by kezia.ch.wibowo on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words immigrants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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