You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

*Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

You should write at least 150 words.
The tables illustrate Fairtrade's revenue from the sale of labelled
coffee
and bananas in 1999 and 2004 respectively, the data was collected in the
countries
of the
UK
,
Switzerland
,
Denmark
, Belgium and
Sweden
.
Overall
, the
UK
has a significant growth in the sale of
coffee
and in the revenue of bananas,
Switzerland
made a remarkable increase,
while
Sweden
and
Denmark
faced a slight decline. It is obvious that in the
market
of selling
coffee
, all five
countries
' revenues rose, and the sales in the
UK
's
market
increased from 1.5
million
to 20
million
, which was the biggest growth among the five
countries
. Competing for the revenue from
Switzerland
's
market
of
coffee
, it doubled its own sales in 1999, which was 3
million
. In 2004, it became 6
million
. For the three remaining
countries
,
Denmark
, Belgium and
Sweden
, they all increased to less than 1
million
. Looking at the information on the banana
market
,
Switzerland
had an incredible increase in sales by a factor of more than three. Observating in a more precise way, it increased from 15
million
to 47
million
euros. Meanwhile, the
UK
also
earned an increase,
although
it was not as significant as
Switzerland
, it grew by a factor of 5.5, from 1
million
euros in 1999.
In contrast
, people in
Sweden
and
Denmark
reduced the number of bananas they bought,
therefore
the revenues in the two
countries
decreased.
Sweden
dropped from 1.8
million
to 1
million
,
while
Denmark
fell from 2
million
to 0.9
million
euros.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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