You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

*Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The tables illustrate Fairtrade's revenue from the sale of labelled
coffee
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and bananas in 1999 and 2004 respectively, the data was collected in the
countries
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of the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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, Belgium and
Sweden
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.
Overall
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, the
UK
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has a significant growth in the sale of
coffee
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and in the revenue of bananas,
Switzerland
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made a remarkable increase,
while
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Sweden
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and
Denmark
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faced a slight decline. It is obvious that in the
market
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of selling
coffee
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, all five
countries
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' revenues rose, and the sales in the
UK
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's
market
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increased from 1.5
million
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to 20
million
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, which was the biggest growth among the five
countries
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. Competing for the revenue from
Switzerland
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's
market
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of
coffee
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, it doubled its own sales in 1999, which was 3
million
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. In 2004, it became 6
million
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. For the three remaining
countries
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,
Denmark
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, Belgium and
Sweden
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, they all increased to less than 1
million
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. Looking at the information on the banana
market
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,
Switzerland
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had an incredible increase in sales by a factor of more than three. Observating in a more precise way, it increased from 15
million
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to 47
million
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euros. Meanwhile, the
UK
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also
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earned an increase,
although
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it was not as significant as
Switzerland
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, it grew by a factor of 5.5, from 1
million
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euros in 1999.
In contrast
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, people in
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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reduced the number of bananas they bought,
therefore
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the revenues in the two
countries
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decreased.
Sweden
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dropped from 1.8
million
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to 1
million
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,
while
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Denmark
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fell from 2
million
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to 0.9
million
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euros.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, countries, uk, switzerland, denmark, sweden, market, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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