In many countries schools have severe problems with the student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this ? What solutions can you suggest?

In many

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schools have significant and important

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problems

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with

students

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students'

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behaviour

. I believe that the causes of

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problem

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for

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the educational system and

specially

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for

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the

responsability

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responsibility

of

parents

. Nowadays, our society

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an opportunity to find a solution, so I think that we need to

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big changes in the

method

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methods

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and topics that how we teach in

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school

, and we need to improve the relationship between

parents

and

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. The governments, need to do something with the educational system

,

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apply

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because

the

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student

behaviour

change

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everyday

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for different causes, so the countries need to understand

this

problem

.

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, need to implement new courses with different

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and with an introduction

on

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the internet

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internet

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, because is

atractive

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attractive

to all

students

work

with

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internet

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, but

also

is relevant that some teachers

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don't

like

work

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with

this

new technology, so the governments need to implement

this

new system with a balance between teacher and

students

,

for instance

a new category of score, that the student can see the

behaviour

in an aplication on internet.

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behaviour

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of

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students

in the

school

, the

responsability

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responsibility

of

parents

, because if the student

don¨t

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doesn't

have an education in

the

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own home, is difficult for the teachers in the

school

teach

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about

behaviour

or

responsability

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responsibility

. Somebody

tell

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tells

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as

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us

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that education

begin

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in the home, and there we need to learn about respect,

responsability

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responsibility

, loyalty and other relevant topics in our life,

while

we

don¨t

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don't

work

together teachers and

parents

,

this

problem

with the

students

will be increment in the next years. In conclusion, exist a relationship between the

behaviour

of

students

and the

school

and home and as a society we need to find a solution

for

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this

problem

, and for

that

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that,

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we need to

work

together