The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given maps illustrate how Stokeford was developed between
two
years Correct determiner usage
the
of
1930 and 2010.
There are some notable changes in the Change preposition
apply
map
by phasing out the shop, the gardens and the large house and establishing some residential area
, a retirement Fix the agreement mistake
areas
center
and access roads which did not exist in 1930.
In terms of development, the road crossing the bridge which had not branched in 1930, developed and in 2010, three roads were builtChange the spelling
centre
newly
. Rephrase
apply
Moreover
, primary school was extended to double the size of previous
one. Correct article usage
the previous
Although
the post office was remained
unchanged, the shop situated to Change to the active voice
remained
has remained
north
of that was removed in the Add an article
the north
last
version of the map
. Besides
, both the gardens and the large house in the middle of the map
transformed into retirement home
Fix the agreement mistake
homes
as well as
a street connecting this
building to the main road and also
some residential houses were constructed mainly around the new streets.
Looking at the sout
part of the Correct your spelling
south
map
indicates that farmland was eliminated in 2010, too. There is no considerable change in the map
that could be mentioned.Submitted by hamidreza.rezaei21 on
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