The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three different types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three different types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The three pie charts show information about three different kinds of nutrients and their prevalence in typical
American
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meals. There are four kinds of
meal
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meals
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mentioned, including snacks. The figures for
sodium
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and saturated fat are loosely similar, but for added
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sugar
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sugar,
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they are quite different.
Sodium
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and saturated fat are both extremely common in typical
American
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dinners.
According to
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the pie charts, 43% of
sodium
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is consumed at dinner time
as well as
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37% saturated fat, but just 23% of added
sugar
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is found in
American
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dinners. An
American
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lunch is made up of almost a third
sodium
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, more than a quarter saturated fat, and about a fifth added
sugar
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. Breakfasts contain the least amount of these potentially unhealthy ingredients, at 14%
sodium
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and 16% for both saturated fat and added
sugar
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. The figures for snacks look quite different. These are overwhelmingly comprised of added
sugar
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, at a staggering 42%. These foods
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contain 14%
sodium
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and 21% saturated fat.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words american, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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